Monday, April 20, 2015

Revised Analysis Papers

For those not happy with their grades of the Analysis Paper, you have one chance to improve your score. Please post your revised analysis papers here, as comments to this post.

- It is ok if these new drafts have a lower word count.
- If you somehow do a terrible job and write a worse paper the third time around (this never happens) you will keep the highest grade.

Remember to:
- completely rewrite the draft, don't just fix grammatical errors
- address larger issues that I raise in my comments
- include your previous draft with my comments
- if you visit the ELC, you can also document this in your revision

12 comments:

  1. https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1ksBGs7b-Om2OsMx0cSDCmd_JT2fnN6cGZoPdowJCQiE/edit

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  2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ca-i0lwrlmlN4FKYcUj7Ze7Nv5aWFjqr8TS5v0BxoOI/edit

    Lotus, Xinhe Zhou

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  3. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n1Z_HMJzKT1Vx1zuRWcEsNRz2CLYpVX4cVzyzokGBVc/edit

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  4. https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1Qm9eCeMK1S9VS83Rwx_ZuGOr9PZBnTsk1yGqiKTwUHU/edit?usp=sharing

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  5. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UQVKZjMcC-9iuFVWvnMF9MNVhhr2ww4TY3sVVzUI-WQ/edit

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  6. Previous Draft:
    https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1oHuBq9WtR-aAzL26MaI6uodL0L8nagheXe6pgGRI2gc/edit?usp=sharing
    Revised Draft:
    https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1rFr98iiCgkvQowD5vJloDIWVkGA-S9bcaxo47qbyUC8/edit?usp=sharing

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  7. Final Draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12XF_q4HSKzhRTaDiIXiGovEk7t7WzTSZ7X2222IhMdc/edit
    Previous Draft:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/17yQhHBVV341Y-hck-GVp730VsB-4SI2HMuhoZhWpqcM/edit

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  8. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EPsVz-rOv-SIPIQevhhQVYREymP603xBU0FJMcEr9Ys/edit

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  9. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LHHtWlu5POQzAwZVazTilHcwqrnSaBuq3fxCB7Gc3MQ/edit#

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  10. https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1v-K0xkJoiWl9251VUni9Go_f4GifpDcH0irSjVk_6Po/edit?usp=sharing

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  11. April: https://docs.google.com/a/kean.edu/document/d/1W06mEf-EGmS4URvYatkDtPGl0hsCRvuWFk2junsMcEQ/edit

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  12. Final short analysis: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12hUBD2MDS2-6ICyVFJI3q9Hqfm-J-8Q7Qp_DAS9mLsg/edit?usp=sharing

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